Fiction Piece #4
Hi Ted, I feel a bit strange commenting on this piece here, but I think "they stopped burning their bras" is a darling that needs to go, and the sentence is strong enough without it.
Also, Chelsea boots don't have laces.
Take care.
Hi Ted, I feel a bit strange commenting on this piece here, but I think "they stopped burning their bras" is a darling that needs to go, and the sentence is strong enough without it.
Also, Chelsea boots don't have laces.
Take care.